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48 Hello. My name is Harry Kim, and I want to ask a favor for the upcomming classical play. In fact, I was about to watch this play with my parents. However, my father get infected by covid 19, and I am afraid we can't make it on time. Is it possible to make a refund for us? We will happily appreciate even though you offer us other tickets. Thanks.
49 Hello, This is Harry Kim speaking and I am one of your clients. I called you because of my connection problem. There are some of connection glitch since yesterday. Can you tell me why It is happening and settle this problem? Actually I have lots of officeworks to do in my home, so I want this problem to be settled immidiately.
50 Hello, This is Harry Kim, one of your students. I called you because I am afraid that I can't be present for your class tomorrow. I have my girlfriend, and she is very sick. Maybe I have to go to the hospital to look for her. I hope you can understand my situation. I will do more and more heavily next day.

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Hi Harry, 
I really liked how you composed your sentences. In spite of some grammar lapses, your sentences were still good. You managed to deliver your messages across and you have made your meaning clear. It would be better if you'll get yourself familiar with a variety of sentence patterns and proper use of prepositions and articles. Keep up the good work. Learn more vocabulary words. I believe that you'll be fluent in English as you study more. Teacher QUENNY
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48 
Hello. My name is Harry Kim, and I want to ask a favor for the upcomming classical play. 
>> Hello. My name is Harry Kim, and I want to ask a favor for the upcoming classical play.
In fact, I was about to watch this play with my parents. 
>> In fact, I bought 3 tickets online and I was about to watch this play with my parents. 
However, my father get infected by covid 19, and I am afraid we can't make it on time.
>> However, my father suddenly got sick and infected by covid 19, and I am afraid we can't make it on time to watch the classical play. 
 Is it possible to make a refund for us? We will happily appreciate even though you offer us other tickets. Thanks.
>> Is it possible to make a refund for the 3 tickets I bought online? We will happily appreciate it even though you offer us or replace it with other tickets. Thank you for your kind consideration. 
49 
Hello, This is Harry Kim speaking and I am one of your clients. 
>> Hello, This is Harry Kim speaking and I am one of your clients.
I called you because of my connection problem. 
>>  I called you because of my telephone connection problem at home. 
There are some of connection glitch since yesterday.
>> There are some connection glitches since yesterday. 
 Can you tell me why It is happening and settle this problem? 
>> Can you tell me why it is happening?  
Actually I have lots of officeworks to do in my home, so I want this problem to be settled immidiately.
>>  Actually, I have lots of Officeworks to do in my home right now, so I want this problem to be solved immediately. And please take immediate action about this problem and settle this problem as soon as possible. Thank you for taking my call.
50 
Hello, This is Harry Kim, one of your students. 
>> Hello, This is Harry Kim, one of your student basketball players. 
I called you because I am afraid that I can't be present for your class tomorrow. 
>> I called you because I am afraid that I can't be present for your class and I can't make it to your basketball practice tomorrow. 
I have my girlfriend, and she is very sick. 
>>  have a girlfriend and she is very sick and she's in the hospital now.
Maybe I have to go to the hospital to look for her.
>> And I need to go to the hospital to look for her. 
I hope you can understand my situation.
>> I hope you can understand my situation. 
 I will do more and more heavily next day.
>> I will double my time and practice more the next day. Thank you for your kind consideration. 
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48 Hello. My name is Harry Kim, and I want to ask a favor for the upcomming classical play. In fact, I was about to watch this play with my parents. However, my father get infected by covid 19, and I am afraid we can't make it on time. Is it possible to make a refund for us? We will happily appreciate even though you offer us other tickets. Thanks.
49 Hello, This is Harry Kim speaking and I am one of your clients. I called you because of my connection problem. There are some of connection glitch since yesterday. Can you tell me why It is happening and settle this problem? Actually I have lots of officeworks to do in my home, so I want this problem to be settled immidiately.
50 Hello, This is Harry Kim, one of your students. I called you because I am afraid that I can't be present for your class tomorrow. I have my girlfriend, and she is very sick. Maybe I have to go to the hospital to look for her. I hope you can understand my situation. I will do more and more heavily next day.








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