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What have you lost while traveling?

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Actually, I haven't lost my thing while traveling. However, my mother have lost her wallet in Lotte World. After she realized that she lost her wallet, the amusement park was going to close door. Like that reason, her heart was beating faster, and she looks very nervous. Because she is my mother, so I was worried about things happened recently.
Finally she could find her wallet. Fortunately, she found hers in their office which can find things lost.
It happened when I was 6 years old, but It was shocking for me, so I remember this happening until now.
Thank you.

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Hi, Yun Su!
This experience might really be shocking for you since you can still remember it up to now. It's a good thing you haven't lost anything while traveling.
-T. Caitlyn
Actually, I haven't lost my thing while traveling. 
>>Actually, I haven't lost anything while traveling. 
However, my mother have lost her wallet in Lotte World. 
>>However, my mother lost her wallet when we were in Lotte World.
After she realized that she lost her wallet, the amusement park was going to close door.
>>She only realized that she lost her wallet when the amusement park was about to close.
Like that reason, her heart was beating faster, and she looks very nervous. 
>>Because of that, her heart was beating faster and she looks really nervous.
Because she is my mother, so I was worried about things happened recently.
>>I was also worried about what happened because she's my mother.
Finally she could find her wallet. 
>>Finally, she found her wallet.
Fortunately, she found hers in their office which can find things lost.
>>Fortunately, she found it in the lost and found office.
It happened when I was 6 years old, but It was shocking for me, so I remember this happening until now.
>>This happened when I was 6 years old but I can still remember it up to now because it was shocking for me.
Thank you.
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