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37 I love spending my time listening to music and I am pleased to know that you like music, too. It is a good pleasure to ask you about your music liking. The first question is, do you like music? My taste in music is rock music. It makes me feel energetic especially when I go to the concert hall. And I am also wondering about how often do you listen to music. For me, Even though I am a busy guy, I listen to music everyday. Lastly, How do you listen to music? I listen to music by my airpod earphone because of its convinience.
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I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant at 5'o clock on Sunday. The reservation is for four people. Since I am a new comer of your restaurant, I have a few questions. Is the parking area available? I am nervous about your parking area because It will be busy on that day. Furthermore, do you offer discount? We will order more than 200000won dishes, So I want you to make a discount.
I would appreciate your help.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Harry, 
You always put your best and do great in the class. I am confident that you'll improve more with your communication skill with thorough practice. Always do your best and the best things will also happen when you study English continuously. Good job so far! I would just like to highlight some important aspects we could improve on so we could sustain your progress.  Keep improving your English skills. ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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37
I love spending my time listening to music and I am pleased to know that you like music, too. 
>> I love spending my time listening to music and I am pleased to know that you like listening to music  too.
It is a good pleasure to ask you about your music liking. The first question is, do you like music? 
>> It's my pleasure to ask you about the genre of music you like to listen to. . The first question is, do you like music? 
My taste in music is rock music. It makes me feel energetic especially when I go to the concert hall. 
>> My favorite genre of music is rock music. It makes me feel energetic especially when I go to the concert hall.
And I am also wondering about how often do you listen to music. For me, Even though I am a busy guy, I listen to music everyday. 
>>  And I am also wondering about how often do you listen to music. For me, Even though I am a busy guy, I listen to music every day. 
Lastly, How do you listen to music? I listen to music by my airpod earphone because of its convinience.
>> Lastly, How do you listen to music? I listen to music using my wireless AirPods because it's very convenient.
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I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant at 5'o clock on Sunday. 
>>  I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant at 5'o clock on Sunday. 
The reservation is for four people. Since I am a new comer of your restaurant, I have a few questions. 
>> The reservation is for four people. Since I am a newcomer to your restaurant, I have a few questions. 
Is the parking area available? I am nervous about your parking area because It will be busy on that day.
>>  Is the parking area available? I am nervous about your parking area because there are always lots of people visiting a restaurant on weekends so I think it will be busy on that day. 
 Furthermore, do you offer discount? We will order more than 200000won dishes, So I want you to make a discount. I would appreciate your help.
>>  Furthermore, do you offer discounts? We will order more than 200000won dishes, so I want you to know if we have a discount. I would appreciate your help.
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37 I love spending my time listening to music and I am pleased to know that you like music, too. It is a good pleasure to ask you about your music liking. The first question is, do you like music? My taste in music is rock music. It makes me feel energetic especially when I go to the concert hall. And I am also wondering about how often do you listen to music. For me, Even though I am a busy guy, I listen to music everyday. Lastly, How do you listen to music? I listen to music by my airpod earphone because of its convinience.
38
I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant at 5'o clock on Sunday. The reservation is for four people. Since I am a new comer of your restaurant, I have a few questions. Is the parking area available? I am nervous about your parking area because It will be busy on that day. Furthermore, do you offer discount? We will order more than 200000won dishes, So I want you to make a discount.
I would appreciate your help.
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