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회원님의 영작문

Why is the weekend important?
The reason is simple. Because we need a rest. we did many things at week days. Many adults go to there work, many kids go to school and academy. So the weekend is like a heaven.
What should you always do during the week?
Theres many things I have to go to the academys, play in the house, or fight with my little sister.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Seung Ju,
Weekends offer a respite from the rat race. Not only does it reset your body, but it also lowers your levels of stress, plus uplifts your mood. The weekend is a great time to spend a few moments planning your upcoming week. The week feels a lot more manageable when you go into it with a plan because all you have to focus on is execution. And feeling well-rested also helps you stay motivated and helps you actually comprehend and understand what you are learning. Always enjoy your weekend. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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Why is the weekend important?
>> Why is the weekend important?(Correct)
The reason is simple. Because we need a rest. 
>> The reason is simple it's because we need a rest. 
we did many things at week days. Many adults go to there work, many kids go to school and academy. 
>> We do many things on weekdays. Many adults go to their work and well many kids go to school and academy. 
So the weekend is like a heaven.
>> So the weekend is like heaven for me and for many people. 
What should you always do during the week?
>> What should you always do during the week?(Correct)
Theres many things I have to go to the academys, play in the house, or fight with my little sister.
>> There are many activities and homework I have to do on weekdays like going to the academies, playing in the house, or fighting with my little sister.

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Why is the weekend important?
The reason is simple. Because we need a rest. we did many things at week days. Many adults go to there work, many kids go to school and academy. So the weekend is like a heaven.
What should you always do during the week?
Theres many things I have to go to the academys, play in the house, or fight with my little sister.
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