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No, I don't think uniforms make social differences small. And I don't think school uniforms make students unique.
Because school uniforms are for students to wear at school. It's because what they wear at school can be weird or uncomfortable for the viewer.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


No, I don't think uniforms make social differences small. 
>>> No, I don't think uniforms make social differences smaller. 

And I don't think school uniforms make students unique.
>>> CORRECT!

Because school uniforms are for students to wear at school. 
>>> CORRECT!

It's because what they wear at school can be weird or uncomfortable for the viewer.
>>> If there are no school uniforms, students might wear improper clothes at school. 

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