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Do you believe in the saying “Tell me who your friends are and I’ll tell you who you are?”

작성자: 김*경
2022-02-21 284

회원님의 영작문

Friendship is a relationship of mutual affection between people. It is a stronger form of interpersonal bond than an acquaintance or an association. So If someone is in a friendship with you, he or she has a deep relationship with you. As the old saying goes, birds in a feather flock together. People with similar personalities, tastes, or characters tend to get along with each other, and vice versa. It's because we feel more comfortable when we are with similar people. We can understand and feel for each other.

Therefore, I can tell you who you are through your close friends. Your close friends have many things in common with you, and many similarities with you. They have many clues with which I can guess who you are; your character, personality, and even taste.

To make a long story short, I agree with and utilize the saying above. I'll guess who he or she is through his or her friends when I am supposed to know about him or her, such as before making a contact or hiring.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Steve! The overall content of your work is comprehensible. You were able to make great sentences. Keep it up!


- Debbie

Friendship is a relationship of mutual affection between people.
>> This is a good sentence. 

 I is a stronger form of interpersonal bond than an acquaintance or an association.
>> This is a good sentence. 

 So If someone is in a friendship with you, he or she has a deep relationship with you. 
>> Therefore, if someone is friends with you, he or she has a deep relationship with you.

As the old saying goes, birds in a feather flock together. 
>> As the old saying goes, birds of a feather flock together. 

People with similar personalities, tastes, or characters tend to get along with each other, and vice versa. 
>> This is a good sentence. 

It's because we feel more comfortable when we are with similar people. 
>> This is a good sentence. 

We can understand and feel for each other.
>> This is a good sentence. 

Therefore, I can tell you who you are through your close friends.
>> This is a good sentence. 

Your close friends have many things in common with you, and many similarities with you.
>> Your close friends have many things in common with you.

They have many clues with which I can guess who you are; your character, personality, and even taste.
>>  These things can be clues to what your character and tastes are. 

To make a long story short, I agree with and utilize the saying above. 
>> To make a long story short, I agree with the saying above. 

I'll guess who he or she is through his or her friends when I am supposed to know about him or her, such as before making a contact or hiring.
>> Before hiring someone, I'll guess who he or she is through his or her friends.
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