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What are the things that can make you angry?
There's many reason about makes me angry. Some times, my little sister, some times about many things.
How do you manage your anger?
I manage my anger to thinking about good thinks.

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Hi Seung Ju,
Anger is an emotion characterized by antagonism toward someone or something you feel has deliberately done you wrong.  Expressing, suppressing, and calming are the three main approaches to managing your anger. Expressing your angry feelings in an assertive, not aggressive manner is the healthiest way to express anger. To do this, you have to learn how to make clear what your needs are, and how to get them met, without hurting others. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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What are the things that can make you angry?
>> What are the things that can make you angry? (Correct)
There's many reason about makes me angry. Some times, my little sister, some times about many things.
>> There are many reasons that make me angry. Sometimes, my little sister, sometimes about many things when I misplace them. 
How do you manage your anger?
>> How do you manage your anger?(Correct)
I manage my anger to thinking about good thinks.
>> I manage my anger by thinking about good things that happened to me and being an optimistic person. 
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What are the things that can make you angry?
There's many reason about makes me angry. Some times, my little sister, some times about many things.
How do you manage your anger?
I manage my anger to thinking about good thinks.
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