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Hello? Teacher Andrea~~
I think I should give me punishment. Homework. I'm terribly sorry about what happened yesterday. The more my phone rang
the more I felt sorry..didn't you smell alchol from my voice? Because of Hang over it was a very long day today.

I always want to ask you something about you. But my tongue is out of control. And I am still busy listening to you and understand what you're saying : ) I will not hurry but I hope the day comes soon!

What is your plan this weekend?
I guess I could not ask you even one question on monday again.

I still have 3days to work but you
Have a good weekend^^

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Hi Q!^^ 

I actually didn't notice that you had a hang over. hahaha
You sounded the same, I guess you really tried hard to talk properly. 
I wonder what your question is. You ca always ask me, no need to be shy.
I am willing to answer any questions that you have. 

Here's my weekend plan. 
1. Do the laundry.
2. Fix the clothes. 
3. Clean the house. 
4. Go to church. 
5. Do some errands.
6.  Meet some of my friends. 

Teacher Andrea 

 Hello? Teacher Andrea~~
>> Hello, Teacher Andrea 

I think I should give me punishment. 
>> I think I should have a punishment. 
>> OR: I think I deserve to have a punishment. 

I'm terribly sorry about what happened yesterday. 
>> Correct 

The more my phone rang the more I felt sorry..
>> The more my phone rang, the more I felt sorry. 

didn't you smell alchol from my voice? 
>> Did you notice from my voice that I was drank? 

Because of Hang over it was a very long day today.
>> Because of my hang over, I felt that today is a very long day. 

I always want to ask you something about you. 
>> I always want to ask something about you.  

But my tongue is out of control.
>> But my tongue is uncontrollable.  

And I am still busy listening to you and understand what you're saying : )
>> I am still busy listening and understanding you. 

 I will not hurry but I hope the day comes soon!
>> I am not in a hurry but I hope that day will come soon. 

What is your plan this weekend?
>> Correct 

I guess I could not ask you even one
 question on monday again.
>> I guess I could not ask you even a single question on Monday.  

I still have 3days to work but you
Have a good weekend^^
>> I still have to work for three days, have a good weekend. 
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