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I usually spend time with my family on weekends. Every weekends, We make foods and watch movies. Also I have a dog, so we take a walk together. Actually, my favorite way to spend with my family is to go anywhere but it is not easy because everyone is tired. Spending time at home is not special things but i like these ordinary times. I will try to spend more time with my family.

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Hi Ye In! 
It's also good to spend a quality time with family. 

I usually spend time with my family on weekends. 
>>> CORRECT!
Every weekends, We make foods and watch movies. 
>>> We make food and watch movies every weekend.
Also I have a dog, so we take a walk together. 
>>> CORRECT!
Actually, my favorite way to spend with my family is to go anywhere but it is not easy because everyone is tired. 
>>> CORRECT!
Spending time at home is not special things but i like these ordinary times. 
>>> Spending time at home is nothing special, but I like this these ordinary times. 
I will try to spend more time with my family.
>>> CORRECT!
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