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Are romantic movies damaging to real relationships? Explain your answer in five sentences.

When I am not married, I liked to watch the romantic movies in other country. But I don't like to watch when it comes to the romantic Korean dramas. That's because the actor is too perfect to be real. For example He knows everything she suffers from. And his appearance is very good. Besides, at last, someone become a rich to get married. Don't dream, a CEO in real never marry you. Recently, my husband love the drama, a gentleman and a lady. It is a same story^^. The actor looks very handsome and gentle. Many people may feel sad when they compare to their husband or wife.

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Hi Rachel! It is good to know your opinion about romantic movies. I agree that most of movie actors in K-dramas are too good to be real. haha. Thanks for your honest opinion. I hope to hear from you soon. Keep safe!

~T. Annie



When I am not married, I liked to watch the romantic movies in other country. 
>>When I was single, I used to like watching romantic movies from other countries.
But I don't like to watch when it comes to the romantic Korean dramas. 
>> But I don't like to watch romantic Korean dramas.
That's because the actor is too perfect to be real.
>>Correct!
>>OR: Because movie actors are too perfect to be real.
 For example He knows everything she suffers from. And his appearance is very good.
>>For example, he knows everything she suffers from and his appearance is very good.
Besides, at last, someone become a rich to get married. 
>>Besides, someone eventually becomes wealthy enough to marry.
Don't dream, a CEO in real never marry you. 
>>Don't dream. A CEO in real life will never marry you. 
Recently, my husband love the drama, a gentleman and a lady. 
>>Recently, my husband has developed a taste for a drama titled  "A Gentleman and a Lady."
It is a same story^^.
>>It is the same story.
 The actor looks very handsome and gentle. 
>>Correct! 
Many people may feel sad when they compare to their husband or wife.
>>Many people may feel sad when compared to their husband or wife. 


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