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What is the worst news you\'ve ever heard in South Korea? Explain in detail.

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What is the worst news you've ever heard in South Korea? Explain in detail.

Recently, number of COVID-19 confirmed cases are increased every day.
That's why I can't hang out with my friends for two months.
I want to meet friends and eat delicious food at a famous restaruant.
I want to have a fun chat without wearing a mask.

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Hi Monica:)

Yes, I think everyone is affected by this. All of us hope that the pandemic will be over already. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Recently, number of COVID-19 confirmed cases are increased every day.
>> Recently, number of COVID-19 confirmed cases are increasing every day.

That's why I can't hang out with my friends for two months.
>> CORRECT

I want to meet friends and eat delicious food at a famous restaruant.
>> I want to meet friends and eat delicious food at a famous restaurant.

I want to have a fun chat without wearing a mask.
>> CORRECT
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