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Do you forgive people easily when they did something bad to you? Why or why not?

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For me, if the person did it as just a mistake, I forgive the person easily, but if the person did it with a bad purpose, than I don't forgive the person.
If the person did it as just a mistake, I can forgive the person easily because I might do the same thing too.
But I can't forgive the situation that someone did a bad thing to me with a bad purpose because I would really angry in that situation, and also it is a wrong thing.
So I think I forgive the person easily or not whether it is just a mistake or not.

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Hi John:)

Yes, sometimes there are things that are unforgiveable. We have a hard time doing it because we got hurt and those people can do it again. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

For me, if the person did it as just a mistake, I forgive the person easily, but if the person did it with a bad purpose, than I don't forgive the person.
>> For me, if a person just made a mistake, I can forgive them easily. But if a person did something bad on purpose, I won't forgive that person. 

If the person did it as just a mistake, I can forgive the person easily because I might do the same thing too.
>> If it's by mistake, I can forgive them easily because people make mistakes. 

But I can't forgive the situation that someone did a bad thing to me with a bad purpose because I would really angry in that situation, and also it is a wrong thing.
>> But I can't forgive someone if they did something bad to me on purpose. I would be really angry in that situation since it's a wrong thing. 

So I think I forgive the person easily or not whether it is just a mistake or not.
>> But still, I can still forgive a person whether it's a mistake or not. 
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