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Do you forgive people easily when they did something bad to you? Why or why not?

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No, I don't. I think that I don't forgive people easily. However, I think forgiving people easily is good because I have to focus on something. If I keep thinking about it, I will not be able to focus on anything. So, I do my best to forgive and understand people easily, but it is not easy as I expected. It's not easy now, but if I keep making effort, clearly, I will be able to do it. I hope that I can accept, forgive and understand something or people easily.

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Hi Kimberlyi:)

Holding grudges towards other people is not okay. Yes, sometimes feeling angry is inevitable but we have to try to to handle our emotions very well. It can benefit us in the long run. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

No, I don't. 
>> CORRECT

I think that I don't forgive people easily. 
>> CORRECT

However, I think forgiving people easily is good because I have to focus on something. 
>> However, I think forgiving people easily is good because it can make me focus on something.

If I keep thinking about it, I will not be able to focus on anything. 
>>CORRECT

So, I do my best to forgive and understand people easily, but it is not easy as I expected. 
>> CORRECT

It's not easy now, but if I keep making effort, clearly, I will be able to do it. 
>> It's not easy now, but if I keep making efforts, I will be able to do so eventually. 

I hope that I can accept, forgive and understand something or people easily. 
>> CORRECT
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