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What is the worst news you've ever heard in South Korea? Explain in detail.
The worst news is come COVID-19 from South Korea.
Beacuse We won't free until the COVID-19 over.

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Hi Emma:)

I think this is also the worst news for everyone all over the world. Your answer is good.  

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

The worst news is come COVID-19 from South Korea.
>> The worst news that I've heard is when COVID-19 reached South Korea. 

Beacuse We won't free until the COVID-19 over.a
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