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As a Christian, I don't believe any gods and ghost expect Jesus. I don't even see a fortuneteller before new year. It's general practice for Korean to see a sharman and consult their future. There are a lot of video contents about zombies have released recently that people are interested in watching. I believe that it helps people preparing possible crisis in their life time such as pandemic, natual disester and so on. These dramas have discribed mental changes of people in the dangerous situation that might not be controlled by human's abilities. Some people are willing to sacrify them to save other people, whereas few trys to alive only for them. Although, dramas and movies are fiction, I believe that it deliver a lot of meaning about human nature. I am not sure what is right, if mankind were born as bad or not. Nevertheless, it's true that people act differently if they are under the diaster. I hope all people under the crisis are alive but if I can save few people, I would

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Hi Hwang!^^ 

Imagination has no limit. Humans are indeed intelligent and imaginative creating these kinds of creatures on there minds.
My husband is always fascinated with zombies. He loves watching movies about them. he will always tell me that he needs to be prepared once zombies attacks. 
I think that is a part of him that is so childish. :) 
He would even scream at some scenes. 

If ever all people will be a zombie the next day, I would rather stay at home. 
I think it is the safest place for me.

Teacher Andrea 

 As a Christian, I don't believe any gods and ghost expect Jesus. 
>>As a Christian, I don't believe in any gods, except Jesus, and ghosts. 

I don't even see a fortuneteller before new year. 
>> I don't even see a fortune teller before the New Year. 

It's general practice for Korean to see a sharman and consult their future. 
>> It's a general practice for Koreans to see a shaman and consult about their future.  

There are a lot of video contents about zombies have released recently that people are interested in watching. 
>> There are a lot of videos about zombies that has been released recently which people are interested in watching. 

I believe that it helps people preparing possible crisis in their life time such as pandemic, natual disester and so on.
>> I believe that it helps people prepare for possible crisis in their life such as pandemic, natural disasters and so on. 

These dramas have discribed mental changes of people in the dangerous situation that might not be controlled by human's abilities.
>> These dramas described the mental capability of people in dangerous situations that might be controlled by human's abilities. 

Some people are willing to sacrify them to save other people, whereas few trys to alive only for them. 
>> Some people are willing to sacrifice themselves to save other people, whereas, few will try to survive by their own. 

Although, dramas and movies are fiction, I believe that it deliver a lot of meaning about human nature. 
>> Although dramas and movies are fictions, I believe that it delivers a meaningful message about human nature. 

I am not sure what is right, if mankind were born as bad or not. 
>> Correct 

Nevertheless, it's true that people act differently if they are under the diaster. 
>> Nevertheless, it's true that people act differently if they are under pressure. 

I hope all people under the crisis are alive but if I can save few people, I would
>>  I hope that all people will survive with whatever crisis, but if I can save people, I would. 

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