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Hi~~teacher

작성자: 박*형
2022-02-09 326

회원님의 영작문

How did you get your name?

I don't know who made my name. But my name is very different from my sisters's name. So I asume that my parents felt so happy about getting me. Even if I feel like my sisters are one team, I love my name. Also, I am the youngest of them so I can endure this situation. :)
My first son's name named after a popular singer in Korea at that time. I named his name. Because I loved the singer who was very hansome. He was good at dancing,too. Whenever I find out same name among my son's friends, I have a fun. What is the reason they named just like that? I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singing, he will be a great scientist.:)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Miss Rachel!

Thank you for answering this question, I am always curious about the origin of people's names. I hope you were able to check out the corrections I made.

Keep up the hard work! 
-Teacher Violet.

I don't know who made my name.
>> CORRECT!

But my name is very different from my sisters's name. 
>> (Did you mean 1 sister) But my name is very different from my sister's name. 
>> (or many sisters?) But my name is very different from that of my sister's.

So I asume that my parents felt so happy about getting me. 
>> So I assume that my parents felt so happy about having me. 

Even if I feel like my sisters are one team, I love my name. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even if I feel like me and my sisters are one team, I love my name. 

Also, I am the youngest of them so I can endure this situation. :)
>> CORRECT!

My first son's name named after a popular singer in Korea at that time.
>> My son is names after a popular singer in Korea at that time.

I named his name. Because I loved the singer who was very hansome. 
>> I gave his name because I loved the singer who was very handsome. 

He was good at dancing,too. 
>> He was good at dancing too. 

Whenever I find out same name among my son's friends, I have a fun. 
>> Whenever I find out that there is a same name among my son's friends, I feel happy.

What is the reason they named just like that? 
>> What is the reason they named him just like that? 

I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singing, he will be a great scientist.:)
>> I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singer, he will be a great scientist.:)
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