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1. _You_ must not be proud of one¡¯s own success.
2. Both colors are good but _one_ is brighter than _the other_
3. I would like something to drink. There are _some_eggs in the fridge.
4. _I_was there to rescue him.
5. _one_of them rose from their seats to protest.
6. Can _you_ answer my questions?
7. _one_ of the boys has received a present.
8. My views are in accordance with _that_ of yours.
9. I don¡¯t like _this_one and I don¡¯t like _that_ one either.
10. There was a chair on _one_ side of the wall.

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Hi Agee,

 

I know that you can really do your best, I am very happy that you are very energetic with our class this morning. Please, remember the corrections that I've made so that you'll not commit the same mistakes all the time.

T. Jeny


1. _You_ must not be proud of one¡¯s own success.
>>correct
2. Both colors are good but _one_ is brighter than _the other_
>>Both colors are good but this is brighter than that.
3. I would like something to drink. There are _some_eggs in the fridge.
>>correct
4. _I_was there to rescue him.
>>correct
5. _one_of them rose from their seats to protest.
>>correct
OR>>All of them rose from their seats to protest.
6. Can _you_ answer my questions?
>>correct
OR>>Can anybody answer my questions?
7. _one_ of the boys has received a present.
>>correct
OR>>Each of the boys has received a present.
8. My views are in accordance with _that_ of yours.
>>My views are in accordance with those of yours.
9. I don¡¯t like _this_one and I don¡¯t like _that_ one either.
>>correct
10. There was a chair on _one_ side of the wall.
>>correct
OR>>There was a chair on either side of the wall.
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