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Homework

작성자: 이*빈
2022-02-08 531

회원님의 영작문

1. The game had scarcely started when the rain came pouring down.
-> Scarcely had the game started when the rain came pouring down.
2. I had hardly reached the station when the train arrived.
-> Hardly had I reached the station when the train arrived.
3. I had never seen such a vast crowd.
-> Never had I seen such a vast crowd.
4. I have seldom heard such a beautiful voice.
-> Seldom have I heard such a beautiful voice.
5. He had hardly finished his lunch when someone knocked at the door.
-> Hardly had he finished his lunch when someone knocked at the door.
6. I have never heard such utter nonsense.
-> Never have I heard such utter nonsense.
7. I had hardly closed my eyes when the telephone rang.
-> Hardly had I closed my eyes when the telephone rang.
8. She had no sooner read the telegram than she started s
-> No sooner had she read the telegram than she started screaming.
9. We no sooner sat down in the train than I felt sick.
-> No sooner sat we down in the train than I felt sick.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Agee

Everyday is a challenge. We need to live with the challenges of life and in order for us to get through with it. We must learn our lessons first. then you will see yourself a  better and mature person.

T.Jeny


1. The game had scarcely started when the rain came pouring down.
-> Scarcely had the game started when the rain came pouring down.
>>correct
2. I had hardly reached the station when the train arrived.
-> Hardly had I reached the station when the train arrived.
>>correct
3. I had never seen such a vast crowd.
-> Never had I seen such a vast crowd.
>>correct
4. I have seldom heard such a beautiful voice.
-> Seldom have I heard such a beautiful voice.
>>correct
5. He had hardly finished his lunch when someone knocked at the door.
-> Hardly had he finished his lunch when someone knocked at the door.
>>correct
6. I have never heard such utter nonsense.
-> Never have I heard such utter nonsense.
>>correct
7. I had hardly closed my eyes when the telephone rang.
-> Hardly had I closed my eyes when the telephone rang.
>>correct
8. She had no sooner read the telegram than she started s
-> No sooner had she read the telegram than she started screaming.
>>correct
9. We no sooner sat down in the train than I felt sick.
-> No sooner sat we down in the train than I felt sick.
>>No sooner did we sit down in the train than I felt sick.
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