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Writing Task (Feb 7th, 2022)

작성자: 남*승
2022-02-08 329

회원님의 영작문







What was the most important thing your parents taught you?
>>
[Give and forget]
This is my mother has always told me since I was a kid. I’ve actually learned a lot from her about the human relationship. So, I try not to remember what I give to someone, so as not to anticipate for him to give something back to me. This is usually the moment when my wife and I clashes with each other. My wife always calculate : How much she gave to her friend as a congratulatory money for a wedding ; how much worth of the flowers she’s been given as a promotion gift, etc. But I like “GIVING”, itself. I’m quite used to forget about what I give to someone and do not expect to it to be paid off by receiving something back from the person.

[Love your brothers]
I have a brother and two older sisters. Including me, all 5. Growing up, I hated myself having such a many brothers because I was always the youngest, so I had to eat as fast as I can to have more than them! So, my father always told me that. ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, U Seung! 

I guess you have learned a lot of nice things and wisdom from your parents. 

Thank you for sharing and have a great day!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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[Give and forget]
This is my mother has always told me since I was a kid. I’ve actually learned a lot from her about the human relationship.
>> Correct! 
So, I try not to remember what I give to someone, so as not to anticipate for him to give something back to me. 
>> Correct!
This is usually the moment when my wife and I clashes with each other. 
>> Correct!
My wife always calculate : How much she gave to her friend as a congratulatory money for a wedding ; how much worth of the flowers she’s been given as a promotion gift, etc. But I like “GIVING”, itself. 
>> Correct!
I’m quite used to forget about what I give to someone and do not expect to it to be paid off by receiving something back from the person.
>>I’m quite used to forget about what I give to someone and do not expect it to be paid off by receiving something back from the person.

[Love your brothers]
I have a brother and two older sisters. Including me, all 5. 
>> Correct!
Growing up, I hated myself having such a many brothers because I was always the youngest, so I had to eat as fast as I can to have more than them! 
>> Growing up, I hated myself having such many brothers because I have been always the youngest, so I had to eat as fast as I can have more than them! 
So, my father always told me that. ^^
>> Correct!
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