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What is the best lesson you have learned from one of your teachers before?

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I would have to say that It's a model training of B737NG. I didn't know there were so many things about airplanes. like hydraulic power, flight controls, pneumatic and etc. But I learned a lot from that class.

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Hi Elic:)

Wow! That sounds nice. Always remember that knowledge is something that no one can take  from us. I hope that you would learn more in the future. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I would have to say that It's a model training of B737NG. 
>> I would have to say that it's the  model training of B737NG. 

I didn't know there were so many things about airplanes. like hydraulic power, flight controls, pneumatic and etc.
>> I didn't know  so many things about airplanes like the hydraulic power, flight controls, pneumatic and etc.

 But I learned a lot from that class.
>> But I learned a lot of these from that class.

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