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What are you looking forward to this 2022 and why?


I thought I would be free from COVID-19 this 2022.
We are still fighting the COVID-19.
However, I am looking forward to be Jbetter than now in the summer.
I want to go on a trip and hang out with my friends without worrying about COVID-19.

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Hi Monica:)

Me too. I thought that the pandemic would be over as well.  We have to hang in there and hope for the best. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I thought I would be free from COVID-19 this 2022.
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We are still fighting the COVID-19.
>> We are still fighting it. 

However, I am looking forward to be Jbetter than now in the summer.
However, I am looking forward to the summer being better than before. 

I want to go on a trip and hang out with my friends without worrying about COVID-19.
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