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My favorite food

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My favorite food is salmon. It is famous for all over the world, and I particularly love it. It is so delicious, but some of Koreans are not fond of this fantasic food. If I eat this a lot, I sometimes feel oily. So I think It is important for me to eat moderately.

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Hi Harry,
Eating our favorite food makes us feel good. And when you eat healthily and take care of yourself, you have more energy, look more alive, and are bound to be more confident. Healthy food like fruits and vegetables make you feel good and a lifestyle full of healthy eating can change someone's life for the better. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:) 

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My favorite food is salmon. It is famous for all over the world, and I particularly love it.
>> My favorite food is salmon. It is famous all over the world, and I particularly love it.
It is so delicious, but some of Koreans are not fond of this fantasic food. 
>> It is so delicious, but some Koreans are not fond of this fantastic food.
If I eat this a lot, I sometimes feel oily. 
>> If I eat this a lot, I sometimes feel oily. 
So I think It is important for me to eat moderately.
>> So I think It is important for me to eat moderately.

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My favorite food is salmon. It is famous for all over the world, and I particularly love it. It is so delicious, but some of Koreans are not fond of this fantasic food. If I eat this a lot, I sometimes feel oily. So I think It is important for me to eat moderately.

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