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Homework: "Friends in need are friends indeed." Explain the passage.

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Friends are the companions who would help standing up when we face difficulties in life. 

>>> OR:  Friends are the companions who would help in standing up when we face difficulties in life. 

Good friends pat on our back when we are frustrated. 

>>> correct

>>> OR: Good friends give us a pat on our back when we are frustrated.     

They would be glad if we get a successful result on something. 

>>>  correct 

People say friends are gifts from god. 

>>> correct  

It's essential to have a good friend, but we have to be good friends first. 

>>> correct  

"Friends in need are friends indeed." 

>>>  correct 

This passage contains many meanings.

>>> correct  

"Friends in need are friends indeed" means true friends are friends that are near us when we need help. 

>>>  correct 

It means that different from faithful friends, fake friends would leave us when we genuinely ask for help after they derive benefits. 

>>It means different from that of faithful friends, fake friends would leave us when we genuinely ask for help after they derive benefits.

On the flip side, true friends would not leave us in good or difficult situations. 

>>>  correct 

For example, some nefarious people would approach someone in great demand, and after they take their goals, they would leave one behind under challenging conditions. 

>>>   correct  

Friends indeed are friends who would never leave without considering our situation. 

>>>   correct  

But, before we hope for a true friend, we have to be good friends first. 

>>>   correct  

To become good friends, we have to be loyal, kind, and maintain an attitude of respect. 

>>>    correct 

We must not betray our friends. 

>>>   correct  

Crossing friends includes lying, alienation, etc., which negatively affects relationships with friends. 

>>>    correct 

Good friendship starts from a belief in each other. 

>>>    correct 

>>> ORGood friendship starts from believing in each other. 

If betray continues, it would destroy a good relationship with a friend. 

>>>    correct 

The crossing is a morally wrong thing. 

>>>   correct  

Kindness is also an initiative component in forming a good relationship with friends. 

>>>   correct  

A minor consideration and thoughtfulness are very touching for others. 

>>>   correct  

For example, when a friend forgets something, we can lend ours. 

>>>   correct  

When those small kindness piles up, fellowship with friends would be better. 

>>>   correct  

Next, respect toward friends is also in need. 

>>>   correct  

As a person, respecting others is a must. 

>>>    correct 

Especially if we make friends, we have to respect he or her country culture, personality, etc. 

>>>   correct  

A delicate treat changes the relationships.

>>>  A delicate treatment changes the relationships. 

Without friends, there is no friendship. 

>>>   correct  

The value of friends is priceless. 

>>>  correct   

As friends are the precious presence in our lives, we have to be respectful, loyal, and kind to them. 

>>>   correct  

The sentence "Friends in need are friends indeed" teaches us how valuable a true friend is.

>>>    correct 


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