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How do you make yourself happy nowadays?

I¡¯m always trying to make myself happy. because I think my emotions are very sensitives.
One of my friend, He said to me ¡°you looks 90% happy and 10% unhappy¡±
I thought about it sometimes I have a deep depression but he might not see me when I have a depression.
I don¡¯t like bad energy and I hate when I¡¯m depressed So I¡¯m trying not to be engulfed in depression.
I¡¯m trying to think happy memories, calling good friends of mine and going to the gym, the cafe, something special place.
Especially I love singing so I¡¯m going to the karaoke!

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Hello again, Mun!

I am so happy that you did a lot of your homework nowadays! You are a very happy and a motivated person and I like that most about you. But sometimes, happy people hurt inside too. That time, finding comfort from others may be difficult but then if you are strong and capable to console yourself, you can overcome times like these. So, it is so important to stop when you are not fine and go when you are.

Of course, you can always tell me if you have something important to say so that you can avoid getting depressed. 

Hence, may your happiness be abundant all the days of your life!

See you in class soon.

-T. Donna :)

I¡¯m always trying to make myself happy. because I think my emotions are very sensitives.
>> I¡¯m always trying to make myself happy because I think my emotions are very sensitive.

One of my friend, He said to me ¡°you looks 90% happy and 10% unhappy¡±
>> One of my friends said, "You look 90% happy and 10% unhappy¡±.

I thought about it sometimes I have a deep depression but he might not see me when I have a depression.
>>  I thought sometimes that I have a deep depression but he might not see me when I have a depression.

I don¡¯t like bad energy and I hate when I¡¯m depressed So I¡¯m trying not to be engulfed in depression.
>> Correct!
Or: I don¡¯t like bad energy and I hate it when I¡¯m depressed so I¡¯m trying not to be engulfed in depression.

I¡¯m trying to think happy memories, calling good friends of mine and going to the gym, the cafe, something special place.
>> I¡¯m trying to think about happy memories, calling good friends of mine, and going to the gym, the cafe, and a place somewhere special.

Especially I love singing so I¡¯m going to the karaoke!
>> Correct!
Or: Especially, I love singing so I¡¯m going to the karaoke!
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