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Homework (Fri, Feb 4th, 2022)

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회원님의 영작문



What do you like about your culture?
>> I would say two things among others.
The first one is the culture in which people respect and admire the elderly. Like many other Oriental countries, the people living these days and their ancestors have deeply been affected by the idea of Confucianism. In the center of the philosophy, there lies love and respect for the elderly. Since they have lived through over a half century, the younger generations would regard that they would have overcome lots of difficulties, hardships and obstacles in their lives, and therefore, that they would have some knowledge and wisdom to pass down to their descendants.
And the second it that we, Koreans, are willing to abide by rules, if needed. For example, at an early stage of COVID-19 pandemic in 2020, when Korean government urged its people to wear a face mask at all times, just few people denied to follow it and most of the people accepted it.

I uploaded another writing as I promised ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, U Seung! 

Wow! You did it! You uploaded your writing and that's really good. I can really see that you are motivated and eager to learn and improve your skills. That is really amazing! Keep doing that! 

I do agree with you. I can see how Korean people show respect and that is really admirable and when it comes to abiding rules, that shows that you are all well disciplined. I hope the situation gets better very soon.

Thank you for sharing and have a great day!

See you later~

~T. Roanne ^_^
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 I would say two things among others.
>> Correct! 
The first one is the culture in which people respect and admire the elderly. 
>> Correct! 
Like many other Oriental countries, the people living these days and their ancestors have deeply been affected by the idea of Confucianism. 
>> Correct! 
In the center of the philosophy, there lies love and respect for the elderly. 
>> Correct! 
Since they have lived through over a half century, the younger generations would regard that they would have overcome lots of difficulties, hardships and obstacles in their lives, and therefore, that they would have some knowledge and wisdom to pass down to their descendants.
>> Correct! 
And the second it that we, Koreans, are willing to abide by rules, if needed. 
>> And the second is that we, Koreans, are willing to abide by the rules, if needed. 
For example, at an early stage of COVID-19 pandemic in 2020, when Korean government urged its people to wear a face mask at all times, just few people denied to follow it and most of the people accepted it.
>>For example, at an early stage of COVID-19 pandemic in 2020, when the Korean government urged its people to wear a face mask at all times, just few people denied to follow it and most of the people accepted it.
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