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Homework (Feb 3th, 2022)

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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?

>> I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. But, actually, it¡¯s kind of difficult because it¡¯s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we¡¯re gonna do on weekends. Whenever my daughter doesn¡¯t wanna go out, my wife pursuads her to go out until she tells, ¡°Yes mommy, I¡¯ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies¡±
However, I don¡¯t think that my wife is bad. She¡¯s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.

I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocaburaries using a vocaburary book. Tomorrow, I¡¯m gonna buy one. Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words. I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!

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Hi U Seung, 

Weekends offer a respite from the rat race. Not only does it reset your body, but it also lowers your levels of stress, plus uplifts your mood. The weekend is a great time to spend a few moments with the family and plan what to do in your upcoming week. Enjoy your weekend spending your time with your family. Have a great weekend.. ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?
>> Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?(CORRECT)

I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. 
>>I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. (CORRECT)
But, actually, it¡¯s kind of difficult because it¡¯s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we¡¯re gonna do on weekends. 
>> But, actually, it¡¯s kind of difficult because it¡¯s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we¡¯re gonna do on weekends. (CORRECT)
Whenever my daughter doesn¡¯t wanna go out, my wife persuades her to go out until she tells, ¡°Yes mommy, I¡¯ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies¡±.
>> Whenever my daughter doesn¡¯t wanna go out, my wife persuades her to go out until she tells, ¡°Yes mommy, I¡¯ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies¡±.(CORRECT)
However, I don¡¯t think that my wife is bad. She¡¯s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.
>>However, I don¡¯t think that my wife is bad. She¡¯s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.(CORRECT)
I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocabularies using a vocabulary book. 
>>I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocabulary using a vocabulary book. 
Tomorrow, I¡¯m gonna buy one. 
>> Tomorrow, I¡¯m gonna buy one. (CORRECT)
Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words.
>>Most of the writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy, and awkward words.
 I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!
>> I want to express my thoughts with the right words for the situation through logical flow!
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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?

>> I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. But, actually, it¡¯s kind of difficult because it¡¯s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we¡¯re gonna do on weekends. Whenever my daughter doesn¡¯t wanna go out, my wife pursuads her to go out until she tells, ¡°Yes mommy, I¡¯ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies¡±
However, I don¡¯t think that my wife is bad. She¡¯s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.

I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocaburaries using a vocaburary book. Tomorrow, I¡¯m gonna buy one. Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words. I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!
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