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What is your favorite tradition in South Korea?

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Hangul is my favorite tradition in South Korea. It was developed by king Sejong the great for the people who can't read 500 years ago. And It's still being used today. I think it's a great tradition for one king to develop and use for people. :)

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Hi Elic:)

I think Hangul is more of a culture than a tradition. But either way, this language has been passed down to many generations and it serves as the identity of South Korea. Great choice!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Hangul is my favorite tradition in South Korea. 
>> CORRECT

It was developed by king Sejong the great for the people who can't read 500 years ago. 
>> It was developed by king Sejong, the great for the people,  who couldn't read 500 years ago. 

And It's still being used today. 
>> It is still being used until today. 

I think it's a great tradition for one king to develop and use for people. :)
>> I think it's a great part of our culture for the kind to develop such language for the people to use in our country. 
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