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Seoul National University is the largest university in Korea.
It is everyone's dream because the university is not only large in size,
but only those who are really good at studying can enter. The number of students is 11,205 as of 2020
The university goal is often called sky, s stands for Seoul university.
I also want to go to Seoul university

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Hi again Ji Yun! 
Yeah, I heard a lot about this university! 
You can enter this university as long as you do well in your studies :) 
Fighting! 
Seoul National University is the largest university in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
It is everyone's dream because the university is not only large in size, but only those who are really good at studying can enter. 
>>> CORRECT!
The number of students is 11,205 as of 2020. 
>>> CORRECT!
The university goal is often called sky, s stands for Seoul university.
>>>The university goal is often called sky, it stands for Seoul university.
I also want to go to Seoul university
>>> CORRECT! 
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