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1. I love to go swimming at the beach on summer.
2. What time do your children usually go to bed at night?
3. Next year, we plan to travel to Taiwan on September.
4. My birthday is next week. I was born at October 15th.
5. My grandfather is very old. He was born at 1939.
6. I am going to meet my friends on Friday evening.
7. Most stores and businesses are closed in New Year's Day.
8. I always get up very early in the morning.
9. My father goes to work on weekdays, from Monday to Friday.
10. After I eat dinner, I like to watch TV at the evening.

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You're doing great Vicky. ^_^ I'm very proud of you. ^_^
T. Irene
1. I love to go swimming at the beach on summer.
>>> I love to go swimming at the beach in summer.
2. What time do your children usually go to bed at night?
>>> Correct.
3. Next year, we plan to travel to Taiwan on September.
>>> Next year, we plan to travel to Taiwan in September.
4. My birthday is next week. I was born at October 15th.
>>> My birthday is next week. I was born on October 15th.
5. My grandfather is very old. He was born at 1939.
>>> My grandfather is very old. He was born in 1939.
6. I am going to meet my friends on Friday evening.
>>> Correct.
7. Most stores and businesses are closed in New Year's Day.
>>> Most stores and businesses are closed on New Year's Day.
8. I always get up very early in the morning.
>>> Correct. 
9. My father goes to work on weekdays, from Monday to Friday.
>>> Correct. 
10. After I eat dinner, I like to watch TV at the evening.
>>> After I eat dinner, I like to watch TV in the evening.







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