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Why name is not very important.

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I think the name is not very important.
That is because the name is just used to division people.
My second reason is it is hard to name people.
My third reason is other names are very complex.
Finally, the name can lead to the nickname.

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Hi, Joey! You have answered the question appropriately. Your homework is well-organized and easy to understand.   Please take note of the corrections though.                   

- Teacher Debbie

I think the name is not very important.
>> I think names are not very important.

That is because the name is just used to division people.
>> That is because they are just used to identify people.

My second reason is it is hard to name people.
>> Moreover, it is hard to name people.

My third reason is other names are very complex.
>> Some of them are very complex.

Finally, the name can lead to the nickname.
>> Some also have nicknames.
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