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Family importance

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My original family consisted of grandparents, parents, five daughters and a son.
That's why our family is a huge family.
Now, my grandparents passed away a few decades ago.
I think that parents' efforts and sacrifices are essential for children to grow well.
In other words, parental endless love is important to children.
That is why my family is so important to me.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I know how important family is to you.
You really have a big family.
I can't wait to hear more about them.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My original family consisted of grandparents, parents, five daughters and a son.
>> My original family consists of my grandparents, parents, five daughters and a son.
That's why our family is a huge family.
>> Correct
Now, my grandparents passed away a few decades ago.
>> My grandparents passed away a few decades ago.
I think that parents' efforts and sacrifices are essential for children to grow well.
>> Correct
In other words, parental endless love is important to children.
>> In other words, endless parental love is important to children.
That is why my family is so important to me.
>> Correct
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