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Kindly answer the following in essay form.
Do you think that having a lot of money can make you happy? Why or why not?

Answer: Yes. Because I buy everything!

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Hi Anne:) 

What are the things you would like to buy with it? Hehehe. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

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