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When I was child, my father way grandma like brother more than me.
And I was young, I don't know about this is a discrimination.
Ususally my grandma likes girls than boy.
My brother is older than me so every time my turn is last.
But now we are grow up.
My brother don't care about my grand parents.
But I'm not. I'm call them often and take care.
So now my grandma understand my precious.

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Hi Ann:) 

I have the experience. All of my relatives like my older brother more because he was the first grandchild. He used to get everything he wanted. But eventually, my brother doesn't care about them anymore. I was the only one who remembers them in everything. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

When I was child, my father way grandma like brother more than me.
>> When I was a child, my grandmother from my father's side liked my brother more than me. 

And I was young, I don't know about this is a discrimination.
>> At that time, I didn't know that it was discrimination. 

Ususally my grandma likes girls than boy.
>> Usually, my grandma likes girls more than boys. 

My brother is older than me so every time my turn is last.
>> My brother is older than me so I always come last in everything. 

But now we are grow up.
>> But now, we are both grown ups. 

My brother don't care about my grand parents.
>> My brother doesn't care about my grandparents but I do. 

But I'm not. I'm call them often and take care.
>> I call them often and take care of them.

So now my grandma understand my precious.
>> So now, my grandma knows how precious I am. 
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