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If a book has been made into a movie, which do you prefer to do first, see the movie or read the boo

작성자: 류*주
2022-01-20 570

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I heard about it from my friend, and his opinion was 'reading the book is the first thing that we have to do.'.
Because if we watch the movie first, then, we know the story of it, so we won't focus on reading the book.
So we won't focus on reading the book, and then there will be no any reasons with reading a book.
But, if we watch the movie first, the situation will be changed.
though we know about the story of the movie because of reading the book, we focus on the movie.
That's why we watch the movie again and again even though we know about the story.
So, because of the meaning about reading the book, I think we have to read the book first.

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Hi John:) 

That's a great ide but people are different. There are people who are more on visuals and there are some that are more on imagining things. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I heard about it from my friend, and his opinion was 'reading the book is the first thing that we have to do.'.
>> I heard from a friend that reading reading the book should be the first thing we have to do. 

Because if we watch the movie first, then, we know the story of it, so we won't focus on reading the book.
>> It is because if we watch the movie first, then, we would know the story of it, so we won't focus on reading the book.

So we won't focus on reading the book, and then there will be no any reasons with reading a book.
>> So if we don't focus, there won't be any reason to read the book anymore. 

But, if we watch the movie first, the situation will be changed.
>> But if we watch first, the situation will be changed. 

though we know about the story of the movie because of reading the book, we focus on the movie.
>> If we know about the story of the movie because of reading the book, we focus more on the movie.

That's why we watch the movie again and again even though we know about the story.
>> Afterwards, we an watch the movie again and again even though we already know the story. 

So, because of the meaning about reading the book, I think we have to read the book first.
>> This is why I pick reading the book first. 
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