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Hi, Andrea. It's Q.
I really like my new name. Just with one touch. Q. It's very quick and easy.. I love it like this nowadays. I know you can understand too.

Today's homework is about a favorite book.
I don't have any favorite book.
my interesting is always changing so often(?)
How can I say.. not sticky?

Anyway, But I can tell you about a book that I read thesedays in every night.

This book has 40 topics.
It's all about something around our daily lives.
We all spend busy days. So it's easy to pass something near by us. It can be very important in our lives though. For example, people who I love, the silence in rainy day, the every sence around me. The writer focus on them and talk in her own sights.

I don't know what to say. Because It's not easy for me to explain it even in Korean. I think I need to get some sleep right now.

Thank you for your teaching today.
I will study more harder!

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Hi Q!^^ 

I totally agree! Your new name suits you well! It is so unique!^^ 

I am also a type of person who doesn't lie reading books. 
Looking at all the words in a book makes me tired. 
My hobbies depend on my moods, too!
I don't have a specific hobby, I just like to kill time. 

Teacher Andrea 

Today's homework is about a favorite book.
>> Correct 

I don't have any favorite book.
>> Correct 

my interesting is always changing so often(?)
>> My interests always change. 

How can I say.. not sticky?
>> How can I say it, no specific? 

Anyway, But I can tell you about a book that I read thesedays in every night.
>> Anyways, I can you about the book I read these past nights. 

This book has 40 topics.
>> Correct 

It's all about something around our daily lives.
>> It's all about daily routines. 

We all spend busy days. 
>> Correct 

So it's easy to pass something near by us. 
>> So we easily pass something near us. 

It can be very important in our lives though. 
>> Correct  

For example, people who I love, the silence in rainy day, the every sence around me. 
>> For example, people who I love, the calmness of rainy days, every scent around me. 

The writer focus on them and talk in her own sights.
>> The writer focused on them and shared her own ideas. 

I don't know what to say. Because It's not easy for me to explain it even in Korean. 
>> I don't know what to say because it's hard for me to explain it even in Korean. 

I think I need to get some sleep right now.
>> Correct  

Thank you for your teaching today.
>> Correct 

I will study more harder!
>> I will study harder.
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