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If you could travel back in time, where would you go?

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If you could travel back in time, where would you go?

If I can travel back in time, I want to go to England.
I think that England is more classical than other European cities.
Also,I want to go to my favriote Sherlock Homles house and British Museum.
I think there is not much time left to go aborad.

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Hi Monica:) 

Yes, that is true. Due to this pandemic, travel trips are greatly affected. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

If I can travel back in time, I want to go to England.
>> If I can travel back in time, I want to go back to England. 

I think that England is more classical than other European cities.
>> CORRECT

Also,I want to go to my favriote Sherlock Homles house and British Museum.
>> Also, I want to go back to my favorite which is Sherlock Holmes's house and the British Museum. 

I think there is not much time left to go aborad.
>> TI think there is not much time left to go to abroad.

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