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I think they miss deadline. It's because when people do things together, then it will be quick.

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Hi David,
Thank you for answering your homework. The reason why to-do lists and deadlines are so effective is that they make large projects or goals more manageable. This type of planning can help students finish school projects or achieve goals, whether short-term or long-term. Goal setting also helps to build intrinsic motivation. Always do your homework on time David. ~  Teacher QUENNY..:)
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I think they miss deadline. It's because when people do things together, then it will be quick.
>>I think they miss the deadline because it's difficult to do multi-tasking as well as to do things at the same time. For the works to finish on time they need to do it quickly. 

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