¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

If you knew your friend\'s husband or wife was cheating on him/her, what would you do?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*°æ
2022-01-14 132

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I will let my friend know it without hesitation to stop things from getting worse than now because I think marriage should be based on trust on each other, and marriage can get back to normal despite some wanderings.

Couples could have a seven-year itch. And there are many ways for them to love each other as they loved. For example, many doctors advise that couples should try to make themselves more attractive to their spouse through getting in shape, having bobbies in common, or having more time to have a heart-to-heart talk.

If couples have kids, couples have to try harder to love each other. A happy family deserves your efforts, and a happy family makes you much happier.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Steve! Thank you for doing your homework! Please take note of the corrections. 


- Debbie

I will let my friend know it without hesitation to stop things from getting worse than now because I think marriage should be based on trust on each other, and marriage can get back to normal despite some wanderings.
>> I would let my friend know about it without hesitation to stop things from getting worse because I think marriage can get back to normal despite some shortcomings.

Couples could have a seven-year itch. 
>> This is a good sentence.

And there are many ways for them to love each other as they loved.
>> However, there are many ways for them to love each other again.

For example, many doctors advise that couples should try to make themselves more attractive to their spouse through getting in shape, having bobbies in common, or having more time to have a heart-to-heart talk.
>> For example, many doctors advise couples to make themselves more attractive for their spouses by getting in shape, having the same hobbies, or having more time to have a heart-to-heart talk.

If couples have kids, couples have to try harder to love each other.
>> If couples have kids, they have to try harder to love each other.

 A happy family deserves your efforts, and a happy family makes you much happier.
>>  A happy family deserves efforts. Moreover, a happy family makes life much happier.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
115284 Would you rather live alone or with other people? Why? º¯*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 996
115283 My Homework °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 451
115282 Homework ÀÌ*¼± ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 1
115281 Nosy and Concerned ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 2
115280 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 0
115279 My strengths ¼º*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 403
115278 Something Successful ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 147
115277 Do you think a mother is a better \"stay-at-home parent\" than a... ±è*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 1
115276 How are penguins different from other birds? ±è*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 1
115275 If you can invent something, what would it be? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 2770
115274 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 1
115273 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 387
115272 Personality ¹®*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 754
115271 kku`s homwork °­*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 8
115270 Homework ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 368
115269 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 317
115268 If I can invent something ÀÌ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 610
115267 What kind of traditional food do you eat for Thanksgiving? ¾È*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 566
115266 Why people say \"there is no place like home\" º¯*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 81
115265 What are some positive ways people deal with stress? ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-05 823

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04