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I think there¡¯s almost nothing I¡¯m good at. But among them, I think I manage money well. I liked calculating when I was a student and I was interested in accounting so I worked in the accounting team in Korea for about 6 years. I usually tend to do it perfectly when I deal with something about money. I was usually in charge of calculating employees¡¯ paychecks and managing revenues and expenditures. I felt satisfied whenever I dealt with it well. My manager in the same team always trusted me and ask for help from me whenever some problems happened. I took care of my salary well in Korea. Even though I earned a little, I could save and collect money a lot. However, I couldn¡¯t have the ability to increase money by investing. If I invested my money well in the past, I would buy my house already. I think that¡¯s a bummer. I could¡¯ve earned a lot of money if I buy an apartment 2 years ago.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

I think there¡¯s almost nothing I¡¯m good at. 
>>>  correct 
But among them, I think I manage money well. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: But if there's one, I think I am good at managing money.  
I liked calculating when I was a student and I was interested in accounting so I worked in the accounting team in Korea for about 6 years. 
>>> correct  
I usually tend to do it perfectly when I deal with something about money. 
>>> correct  
I was usually in charge of calculating employees¡¯ paychecks and managing revenues and expenditures. 
>>> correct  
I felt satisfied whenever I dealt with it well. 
>>> correct  
My manager in the same team always trusted me and ask for help from me whenever some problems happened. 
>>> My manager in the same team has always trusted me and asked for help from me whenever some problems happened.   
I took care of my salary well in Korea. 
>>> correct    
Even though I earned a little, I could save and collect money a lot. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: Even though I earned a little, I could save and collect a lot of money.   
However, I couldn¡¯t have the ability to increase money by investing. 
>>> correct   
If I invested my money well in the past, I would buy my house already. 
>>> correct   
I think that¡¯s a bummer. 
>>> correct    
I could¡¯ve earned a lot of money if I buy an apartment 2 years ago.
>>>  I could¡¯ve earned a lot of money if I bought an apartment 2 years ago. 

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