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I don't know another people but i will choose Norden one because Norden one is the new one so it will be better.

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Hi David, 
Thank you for answering your homework. Modern medicine is the most advanced, scientifically based, and statistically approved therapeutic system and involves the use of drugs and surgeries to help and cure the disease or solve the problem of the patient. ~ Teacher Quenny..:)

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I don't know another people but i will choose Norden one because Norden one is the new one so it will be better.
>> I don't know what other people will choose but I will choose Modern Medicine because modern medicine is the new one so it will be better and effective I think. 
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