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What things are irreplaceable?

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Most of the material items in the world are replaceable. However, I think there are exceptions.
First, we can¡¯t select and change a family when we are born. While we live, we have to keep relations with them.
Next, it¡¯s our abilities. I¡¯m not good at speaking English so I want to replace it but I can¡¯t do that. I can be helped by a translating system, but I can¡¯t keep using it all the time in my daily life when I¡¯m in the middle of conversations. I have no choice but to study and learn English for it. I sometimes imagine that my brain becomes like a computer. If I can do that, I want to change some chips for my abilities. But you know, it¡¯s not possible.
Lastly, I think the earth isn¡¯t replaceable. Therefore, we have to save resources on the earth and not contaminate many things. Even though it already polluted a lot, we can¡¯t live here any more hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

Most of the material items in the world are replaceable. 
>>>  correct
However, I think there are exceptions.
>>>  correct
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rst, we can¡¯t select and change a family when we are born. 
>>>  correct
While we live, we have to keep relations with them.
>>>  correct
Next, it¡¯s our abilities. 
>>>  correct
I¡¯m not good at speaking English so I want to replace it but I can¡¯t do that. 
>>>  correct
I can be helped by a translating system, but I can¡¯t keep using it all the time in my daily life when I¡¯m in the middle of conversations. 
>>> correct 
I have no choice but to study and learn English for it. 
>>> correct 
I sometimes imagine that my brain becomes like a computer. 
>>>  correct
If I can do that, I want to change some chips for my abilities. 
>>> correct 
But you know, it¡¯s not possible.
>>>  correct
Lastly, I think the earth isn¡¯t replaceable. 
>>>  correct
Therefore, we have to save resources on the earth and not contaminate many things. 
>>>  correct
Even though it already polluted a lot, we can¡¯t live here any more hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.
>>>  Even though it' is already polluted a lot, we can¡¯t live here anymore hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.
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