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What preparation will you do before an interview to make a good impression?

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I think a good impression is also important, but giving an impressive impression is more important.
It is good to expect the questions which are going to be asked to me, and I need to think about the answers.
But only good answers or impressions can't be an impressive or memorable.
I need to use my imagination and I have to make memorable answers and impressions for an interview.
Also I have to be good at presentation and speaking to the others.
I need to explain my thoughts and also I have to speak well that others can focus on my interview.
So I will prepare those things for my interview.
And the most important thing for an interview is a confidence and faith about me.

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Hi John:) 

There is a saying that "First impressions last" so we have to make the best out of it. Those are actually god practices to make good impressions. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think a good impression is also important, but giving an impressive impression is more important.
>> CORRECT

It is good to expect the questions which are going to be asked to me, and I need to think about the answers.
>> CORRECT

But only good answers or impressions can't be an impressive or memorable.
>> But only good answers or impressions can't be impressive or memorable.

I need to use my imagination and I have to make memorable answers and impressions for an interview.
>>I need to use my imagination to make a memorable impression. 

Also I have to be good at presentation and speaking to the others.
>> I also have to be good in presentation and speaking to others. 

I need to explain my thoughts and also I have to speak well that others can focus on my interview.
>> I need to explain my thoughts and also I have to speak well so that others can focus on my interview.

So I will prepare those things for my interview.
>> CORRECT

And the most important thing for an interview is a confidence and faith about me.
>> And the most important thing for an interview is a confidence and having faith. 
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