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For financially affordable people, the four-day workweek would generally be good in several respects. They would spend more time with their family or enjoy their hobbies and leisure life. They can take care of their health better and suffer less stress caused by their work. In the economic aspect, the three-day weekend will help activate the market economy, including retail stores, culture and recreation industries, etc.

On the other hand, people like low-wage workers would not welcome the four-day workweek. They might need to have another job for the three-day weekend. Inequality in children's care would get more significant between households, leading to gaps in their education, emotional stability, employment, income, and even life. To prevent those side effects and operate the system well, the government and society should arrange the welfare system in advance.

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For financially affordable people, the four-day workweek would generally be good in several respects. 
>>>  Correct!
They would spend more time with their family or enjoy their hobbies and leisure life.
 >>>  Correct!
They can take care of their health better and suffer less stress caused by their work.
>>>  Correct!
In the economic aspect, the three-day weekend will help activate the market economy, including retail stores, culture and recreation industries, etc.
>>>  Correct!
On the other hand, people like low-wage workers would not welcome the four-day workweek. 
>>>  Correct!
They might need to have another job for the three-day weekend.
>>>  Correct!
 Inequality in children's care would get more significant between households,  leading to gaps in their education, emotional stability, employment, income, and even life.
>>>  Correct!
To prevent those side effects and operate the system well, the government and society should arrange the welfare system in advance.
>>>  Correct!


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