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What is the most challenging about moving to a new place?

작성자: 금*진
2022-01-03 215

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Most of all, adjusting to all new things is the most difficult for me. In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing. Because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore. I’m still having a hard time because of the reasons.
Next, I hate packing and organizing my stuff for moving. I realized that I had tons of stuff in my room before coming to Canada so I had to throw out and organize some stuff first. I sent just what I think is important to Canada by ship. It’s very expensive, but it’s cheaper than by airplane. Its service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months. I was tired of waiting for it. Korea’s delivery service is too fast and I can buy something cheap online easily so I just bought something for later. I didn’t need it right now though. I think it’s not a good habit. After that day, I decided not to buy anything too much for myself. I’m trying to buy only what I really need for myself.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Miss Chloe.

Most of all, adjusting to all new things is the most difficult for me. 
>>> correct  
In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing. Because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore. 
>>> correct   
>>> OR: In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore.   
I’m still having a hard time because of the reasons.
>>> OR: I’m still having a hard time because of these reasons.   
Next, I hate packing and organizing my stuff for moving. 
>>> correct  
I realized that I had tons of stuff in my room before coming to Canada so I had to throw out and organize some stuff first. 
>>> correct   
I sent just what I think is important to Canada by ship. 
>>> correct  
It’s very expensive, but it’s cheaper than by airplane. 
>>> correct  
Its service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months. 
>>> The service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months.
>>> OR: The service by ship is quite slow so it took almost 3 months.
I was tired of waiting for it. 
>>> correct  
Korea’s delivery service is too fast and I can buy something cheap online easily so I just bought something for later. 
>>>  correct    
I didn’t need it right now though. 
>>>  correct   
I think it’s not a good habit. 
>>>   correct  
After that day, I decided not to buy anything too much for myself. 
>>>  correct   
I’m trying to buy only what I really need for myself.
>>>  correct   

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