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I won¡¯t talk behind my friends¡¯ back to others. I think it is very rude. When I was a teenager, I suffered from so much backtalk. I often fought with my classmates because of that problem. I felt betrayed when they slandered me. I thought that I didn¡¯t do anything bad to them. They hated me with no reasons. However, even though some of my classmates didn¡¯t like me, two girls stood up for me during the whole years of high school. They always supported me. I felt very thankful to them, so I decided not to betray them forever. Since they trusted me, I will cherish our friendship and keep our faith.

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Good day, Irene!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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I won¡¯t talk behind my friends¡¯ back to others. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I won't bad mouth my friends to others.
I think it is very rude.
>> CORRECT!
When I was a teenager, I suffered from so much backtalk. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I was often bad-mouthed when I was a teenager.
I often fought with my classmates because of that problem. 
>> CORRECT!
I felt betrayed when they slandered me. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I felt betrated when they talked behind my back.
I thought that I didn¡¯t do anything bad to them. 
>> CORRECT!
They hated me with no reasons. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They hated me for no apparent reason.
However, even though some of my classmates didn¡¯t like me, two girls stood up for me during the whole years of high school. 
>> CORRECT!
They always supported me. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They made me feel like I have their full support.
I felt very thankful to them, so I decided not to betray them forever. 
>> CORRECT!
Since they trusted me, I will cherish our friendship and keep our faith.
>> CORRECT!
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