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Kids have to learn how to wash laundry

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In my opinion, kids have to learn how to wash laundry. Some situation can happen like when in home, kids have to wash laundry by himself because there's anyone in the home who can wash laundry. In this situation, if the kid didn't learn how to wash laundry, it might be that there's no clothes to wear. In addition, it is simple and easy to learn and do. It's just annoying things. However, there are no bad things when learn about it. We can help our moms, too. Then, your mothers will praise you. In conclusion, there are only pros about learning how to wash laundry.

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Hello, Daniel!   You have delivered your ideas in an orderly way. You were able to use good expressions in your work. Awesome! 

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In my opinion, kids have to learn how to wash laundry.
>> This is a good sentence.

Some situation can happen like when in home, kids have to wash laundry by himself because there's anyone in the home who can wash laundry.
>>  If there isn't anyone who can wash laundry, kids have to do the laundry by themselves.

 In this situation, if the kid didn't learn how to wash laundry, it might be that there's no clothes to wear. 
>> In this situation, if a kid doesn't learn how to wash laundry, he/she might not have clothes to wear.

In addition, it is simple and easy to learn and do. 
>> Doing the laundry is simple and easy to learn and do.

It's just annoying things. 
>> It can be annoying at times.

However, there are no bad things when learn about it. 
>>  However, there are no bad things about it.

We can help our moms, too. 
>> This is a good sentence.

Then, your mothers will praise you.
>> Then our mothers will praise us.

In conclusion, there are only pros about learning how to wash laundry.
>> This is a good sentence.
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