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The minimum wage should be $15 per hour. What do you think?
When I heard of it, pop into my mind. It is good idea. Definitely my husband's wage would increase. If I live in America, It is a good news. But there are many factory in Korea. It is true that Korea is different from America. If the minimum wage increase, the price of goods are increase too. It make the goods weaken price competitiveness. We have to export many goods to another country.

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Dear Rachel, 

Again, thank you for your hard work in answering the questions. Your opinions were great! It's true that if the salary of people increases, the prices of goods will also increase. This is the unfortunate truth. :( I do hope we can get higher salaries but there's a lot of negative consequences too.

Keep it up! \( ^o^)/
-Teacher Violet

When I heard of it, pop into my mind. 
>> (Did you want to say:) When I heard of it, one thing popped in my mind.

It is good idea. 
>> It is a good idea.

Definitely my husband's wage would increase.
>>Definitely, my husband's wage would increase. (Please add a comma)

If I live in America, It is a good news. 
>> If I live in America, it is a good news. (Please observe proper capitalization)

But there are many factory in Korea.
>> But there are many factories in Korea.

It is true that Korea is different from America. 
>> CORRECT!

If the minimum wage increase, the price of goods are increase too. 
>> If the minium wage increases, the price of goods will increase too. (If - will)

It make the goods weaken price competitiveness. 
>> It will weaken  the goods' price competitiveness.

We have to export many goods to another country.
>> CORRECT! 
OR>> We have to export a lot of goods. 
(Export already means: to send goods TO OTHER COUNTRIES. So we can remove 'to another country' to avoid repitition) ^^
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