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What is your biggest regret in your life and why?

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When I was a kid, I had many regrets.
But now, I don't have that much regrets.
If I have a regret, it can cause a bad emotion and I will have more and more regrets because of the regret.
And those regrets will make many bad emotions and it will be a vicious cycle.
So nowadays, I don't usually have a regret.
If I get a regret, I try to forget it and I don't think about it so it can't cause any bad emotions.

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Hi John:) 

Regrets are part of our life. Generally, it makes us feel bad but it also allows us to reflect on our actions. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

-Teacher Elise

When I was a kid, I had many regrets.
>> CORRECT

But now, I don't have that much regrets.
>> CORRECT

If I have a regret, it can cause a bad emotion and I will have more and more regrets because of the regret.
>> If I regret something, it can cause some bad emotions and I will regret the things that I might do because of it. 

And those regrets will make many bad emotions and it will be a vicious cycle.
>> It will make a vicious cycle. 

So nowadays, I don't usually have a regret.
>> So nowadays, I try not to regret the things that I do. 

If I get a regret, I try to forget it and I don't think about it so it can't cause any bad emotions.
>> If I am about to regret something, I try not to think about it that much so that I won't feel any bad emotions. 
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