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It is not wrong but I think I need to confirm about it.
If what I heard is really true or not. I got some wrong information from time to time.
Wrong information make broken in people relationships.
If it's not necessary, I don't care about it, but if it will be important, I need to check it.


I have to call the post office, because my mother sent to me parcel but I didn't get it yet.
However when I was tracking my parcel, postman already came my home and he/she put in information 'nobody at home'. But I was in home at that time.
So I will have to call the post office, I'm worried about how to say to them. They are often do fault. They did same mistake too before. Once, my neighbour brought my parcel, the post office man knew wrong my address.


Hello, my mother sent a parcel to me the parcel from Korea but it's not arrived yet. But when I tracked, the online memo on the post office website said, "There's no one at home", but I was in home at that time all.

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Good day to you, Ms. Serena! It¡¯s good to see that you are making an effort answering the homework that I am giving you. I am looking forward to see you in our class. Keep safe! :)
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It is not wrong but I think I need to confirm about it. If what I heard is really true or not. I got some wrong information from time to time.

>> There is nothing wrong with it, but I think that I need to confirm whether it's true or not because I get wrong information sometimes.

Wrong information make broken in people relationships.

>> Wrong information makes people get hurt in relationships.
If it's not necessary, I don't care about it, but if it will be important, I need to check it.
>> 
If it's not necessary then I don't care about it, but if it is important, I need to check it.
I have to call the post office, because my mother sent to me parcel but I didn't get it yet.

>> I have to call the post office, because my mother sent a parcel to me but I haven't received it yet. 
However when I was tracking my parcel, postman already came my home and he/she put in information 'nobody at home'.

>> However when I was tracking my parcel, the postman already came to my home and he/she put an information that nobody was at home.

 But I was in home at that time.

>> But I was at home during that time.
So I will have to call the post office, I'm worried about how to say to them. 

>> So I have to call the post office and I'm worried on how to say it to them. 

They are often do fault. 

>> They are often at fault.

They did same mistake too before. 

>> They did the same mistake too before. 

Once, my neighbour brought my parcel, the post office man knew wrong my address.
>> One time, my neighbour brought my parcel because the post office got the wrong address.


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