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Do you like meeting new people? Why is that?

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Yes. I tend to enjoy meeting new people. I can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information from them. I also can get some energy by doing something with new people. Moreover, if I¡¯m lucky, I can make best friends who will be with me forever. However, I¡¯m always nervous when I meet new people for the first time. I know nothing about them so I need time and effort to get to know them.
By the way, the older I get, the harder I meet new people these days. I always want to meet good and polite people, but there are bad people anywhere. I try to avoid bad and rude people in my daily life. After doing that, I can¡¯t enjoy meeting new people. I think the human relationship is difficult for me after my thirties. Also, we¡¯re trying to avoid meeting someone outside because of the pandemic. We have to be careful each other from infection.

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Thank you for this Chloe!

Yes. I tend to enjoy meeting new people. 
>>> correct (Yes, I tend to enjoy meeting new people.)  
I can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information from them. 
>>> OR: We can share our lives by having a conversation, and give and take some information with them.    
I also can get some energy by doing something with new people. 
>>> I can also be energized by doing something with new people.   
Moreover, if I¡¯m lucky, I can make best friends who will be with me forever. 
>>> ORMoreover, if I¡¯m lucky, I can meet best friends who will be with me forever.   
However, I¡¯m always nervous when I meet new people for the first time. 
>>> correct  
I know nothing about them so I need time and effort to get to know them.
>>> correct 
By the way, the older I get, the harder I meet new people these days. 
>>> correct   
I always want to meet good and polite people, but there are bad people anywhere. 
>>> correct  
I try to avoid bad and rude people in my daily life. 
>>> correct  
After doing that, I can¡¯t enjoy meeting new people. 
>>> correct  
I think the human relationship is difficult for me after my thirties.
>>> correct 
 Also, we¡¯re trying to avoid meeting someone outside because of the pandemic. 
>>> correct 
We have to be careful each other from infection.
>>>  We have to be careful with each other from infection.  
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